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Beware of not Reaching a Conclusion too Quickly “To see is to believe", people always cite this to justify their opinions. It seems that we can bring up a conclusion immediately from what we see and hear. But things are not as simple as this. We live with kinds of theories, and the conclusion of an argument relies not only on the experient materials about them, but also on the theory in which it's built on. So explanation also plays an important part in our way to truth. To conclude too quickly for what we see and hear is self-evident is naive. It will trap us in prejudices, and make us lose the whole view about the question. It is unwise to conclude quickly based on what we see and hear.
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