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新东方托福高分作文:选择慢节奏生活还是快节奏生活?

发布时间:2013-08-05 17:50浏览次数:5820
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题目要求:

Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

题目分析:

两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是,不慌不忙(with full composure),却很有效率(efficient)。所以,我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外,也要看是什么样的事情,工作、学习,都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible),但是与朋友消遣,与家人相伴,却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up),而应该at a slower place。
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;用词灵活多样,也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。

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As we all know the world changing so much every day, the youths who want to keep up with the steps of the times face greater challenges than the old generation. Therefore, there is a problem of whether people should live with slower pace or faster pace has debated heavily. Personally, I declared that the former is more reasonable. Especially, when the standard of living and health is taken into consideration. Firstly, the standard of living is one of the most important things, only when we have a high standard of living, can we work more pleasant and efficient. Taken Li Li and Wang Wen, both of them is my best friend, as an example. Li Li is an aspirant girl who is always in a hurry to do anything and no anytime to enjoy life,but Wang Wen just the opposite, she is an enthusiastic girl who do everything with full composure, and schedules her own time with her pleasure. Although, Li Li spends the most of her time to do things , according to my observation, her efficiency usually lower than the Wang Wen's. What was worse, her family also in disorder. Therefore, in order to have a harmony family and pleasant mood, we need slow down the pace of life. Secondly, modern people take a high risk of health than before for they always keep a high speed to work. With the booming of the economic, the pressure of life also is increased. People who want keep the pace of the era must make great efforts. However, we often said that health is the source of revolution. There is a statistic from internet shown that a fact, more than 70 thousands people dead for disaster per year all over the world, and the number still raising. Facing the reality, I assert that people should pay more attention to their health by controlling the speed of life. Admittedly, a fast pace of life also is beneficial to our life, it can enhance the ability to work. But, the disadvantage of it is too much to ignorance. In conclusion, according the points mentioned above, I insist that we should live with a slow pace for our health and living level.

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