托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第29篇:人类活动与地球的关系

作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达，但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；句式变化较为明显，另外句法层面做的不错。

Many people think that the earth resource is infinite might say that human activity cannot harm the earth. However, I disagree with this statement that human activity makes the earth a better place to live. There're two major aspects that: what the influence was human activity for earth and what have happen on the earth of late years. First, The human activity can make many pollution for the earth and the pollution is the major reason of the earth become more and more poor. For example, although the technology become better, some poor area still use coal to boil water, so it makes a lot of carbon dioxide to influence the earth. Moreover, in recent years, the natural calamities happen on the earth very frequently. According to a report, the reason of natural calamities happen so frequently is human use the earth resource. Many people don't people believe that the earth can ended. So if there is there is no more resource on the earth, can people using carbon dioxide to live? I think it is impossible. In summary, I think that human activity can harm the earth