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2012年12月英语六级作文真题(I):保持信任

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题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任

字数:150满分:100分

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People have a strong consciousness that we can't trust others easily. However, we lose our most important quality if we stick with that idea. How should we maintain our trsut and cope with suspicion? Maintaining trust is our first thing to do.People are suspicious with other persons is bad to build harmonious society.All we can do is believe that everyone is kind. Open our heart may be a way to trust each other.Imagine this:people who don't aquaint each other,smiling to him or her in a supermarket or hotel.When one person is in trouble,another helps him without hasitation.He has no consciousness that the one who he helps is a tricker. People have a kind heart,they help others witout repays.We smile to every one.The world we are living is full of love and trust.People satisfy their life. All in all,let's love people and be loveable.

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