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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第29篇:人类活动与地球的关系

发布时间:2013-08-13 17:26浏览次数:1092
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live.

What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.


有人认为人类活动是在破坏地球,而有人认为人类活动是在改善地球。你持有哪种观点,并给出解释。

字数要求:300字以内。

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Many people think that the earth resource is infinite might say that human activity cannot harm the earth. However, I disagree with this statement that human activity makes the earth a better place to live. There're two major aspects that: what is the influence of human activity on earth and what has happened on the earth in the recent years. First, The human activity can make much pollution for the earth and the pollution is the major reason of earth becoming worse. For example, although the technology has become better, some poor areas still use coal as the main energy, so it makes a lot of carbon dioxide to cause pollution and thus harm the earth. Moreover, in recent years, the natural calamities happen on the earth very frequently. According to a report, the reason why natural calamities happened so frequently is that human beings overuse the earth resources. Many people don't believe that the earth would come to an end. So if there is no more resources on the earth, can people survive on the earth? I think it is impossible. In summary, I think that human activity can harm the earth.

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