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2009年专八英语作文真题:方言在公众场合使用

发布时间:2013-05-18 17:21浏览次数:10532
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题目 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
说明 Are Dialects Just as Acceptable in Public Places?
要求
1.in the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement
2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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用户的作文(系统评分72.5分
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文中衔接词丰富;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误;文中较丰富地使用高级词汇,但单词拼写错误较多。

用户练习作文:

Dialects are kind of culture of people's life, but I don't that it should be used in public places. We could analyze it from three aspects. At the first place, dialects vary from differnt places. Different dialects have its own features in tone, words or expressing ways. Saying in public places with dialects, it is easy to get people misunderstand. When people make a comunicate activity, it is possible to cause severe mistakes if informations get wrong in express and receive process. Next, public places such as meeting room, court or coffee store, are in need of polite. Someone speak his own hometown dialect, making people he is rude and implete. People need to be respected. Finally, although dialects are kind of culture, needed to be herited, we should use them less as possible in public. Because the moderized language denotes our new culture. It also ought to be look as a creativity of new type society. In a conclusion, dialects should not be used in public places. But we still have an necessarity to protect their heritage.

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