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These days, quite a few people prefer to grade others merely through their appearance. Although an impressive charming look is something of which one cannot easily get rid and is capable to make a long-term influence on one’s opinions in the future, we must acknowledge that a pleasing face can’t stand for everything. Numerous reasons will support my perspective. First of all, supposing that we tend to favor and aid good-looking people more than those with a plain face, then this phenomenon will spur the plain-looked to work harder so as to fulfill their self-worth, during which process one must fully enrich one’s mind and inner sight and eventually become a man of competence. Distinctly, by then, a wise man will scarcely assess one’s value solely through its exterior. Additionally, advanced plastic surgeries are already able to modify one’s features to perfection. Undoubtedly it is unnecessary to crave for external beauty, which makes it indeed more absurd to judge by one’s look only. After all, nothing but a smart brain can support us to run and develop our life properly, which is the very essence of life.
