2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowerdays more and more people prefer online shopping .Online shopping gradually become a new fashion.Obviously,online shopping has lots of convinences,it allows people purchase what they want without going out,you just need click your mouse and wait things to be delivered.Besides,you also can chose somethings far away in a short time,in this way,time is saved.However,every coin has tow sides,online shopping has defects too.When people receive what they chose online,some of them may be dissapoted cause it actually not the same as what they excepted before.Worse still,becase people don't pay crash,as online shopping swells their desire,they can't help buying excessive ,useless things,and don't detect the diminishion of deposit. In my point,only when we treat online shopping calmly ,purchase what we really need,can online shopping benefit us!