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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4831
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分83.0分
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文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

用户练习作文:

When it comes to the topic of happiness, everyone’s interpretation varies. An inspiring idea goes that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them. I cannot agree with it more. There is no denying that we will encounter many problems in our lives, however, that doesn’t deprive us of the right to pursue happiness. Nick Vujicic had set a great example for us. Born to be multiple-crippled, he had endured numerous spite and contempt. Yet he had never been abandoned by his parents or himself, who at last initiated his speech career and hence had inspired and elaborated many troubled souls. He also reaped a merry marriage. He taught us to stop regarding obstacles as miserable disadvantages but on the contrary as an opportunity to grow stronger. I believe, even if confronted with difficulties, so long as we pluck up courage with optimism, we are bound to pull through and find our way to happiness.

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