2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

简单句偏多了；衔接词汇很少，建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累；文中用词稍显贫乏，同时请注意单词拼写的检查；连词使用偏少。

shopping online is popular to us recently.because there are much more choice to buyer.Even the price is lower than the shop .Meanwhile .There are some lack on online shopping .Follow is the some question. 1.The speed of the delivery is uncontorl. 2.The quatily of what we buy is uncertainty. 3.The biggest problem is the return the broken things. In my opinion,we can buy the things online class.somethings we can buy online like clothes and the struff for live.Something we buy in shop better like the machine.