采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者词汇表达较多样灵活,也能较准确地使用高级词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用。
When it comes to the topic of happiness, everybody’s interpretations vary. But an inspiring idea goes that happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them, which reveals the nature of happiness. Happiness will be achieved only when we show great courage to confront problems and develop the capacity to solve them. And here I may say some words to you. There is no denying that we will encounter many problems in our life, but that doesn't mean we are deprived of happiness. Many people have set great examples for us to follow: Nelson Mandela was sentenced to 27 years in prison, but he was optimistic and finally became successful in fighting against racial segregation. Steve Jobs was abandoned by his biological parents and dropped out of university but still managed to change the world. In our lives, no one is definitely immune to problems, but we may achieve happiness through striving.