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2013年12月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):幸福之路

发布时间:2014-06-09 16:08浏览次数:4831
要求:
Directions: For this party you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on happiness by referring to the saying "Happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them." You can cite examples to illustrate your point and then explain how you can develop your ability to deal with problems and be happy. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
用户的作文(系统评分83.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,高级词汇可适量增加;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

When it comes to the topic of happiness, everyone’s interpretation varies. An inspiring idea goes that happiness is not the absence of problems but the ability to deal with them, I cannot agree with it more. There is no denying that we will encounter many problems in our lives, however, that doesn’t mean we are deprived of happiness. Nick Vujicic had set a great example for us. Born to be multiple-crippled, he had endured numerous spite and contempt. Yet, he had never been abandoned by his parents or himself, who at last succeeded in his speaking career and hence had inspired many troubled souls. He had also reaped a merry marriage. He encouraged us to stop regarding obstacles as miserable disadvantages but on the contrary as an opportunity to develop our capacities to solve them. No thorns, no thrones. It is the endeavor we dedicate to the solution of the problems that add to our happiness. I believe, even if confronted with difficulties, so long as we pluck up courage with optimism, we are bound to pull through and find our way to happiness.

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