2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇表达比较多样，也能较好的使用一些学术词汇；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

There is a survey in America showing that education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates .In 2011,people who have professional degree earn about 1665 dollars a week.By contrast with some persons who have less than high school doploma only have 451 dollars a week.And the first kind of person has six times lower unemplyment rates than the second one. It is all known that if you want to have a bright future,you should have good education.In fact,it is mostly true.Each employer wants to have a well-educated employee .But,today it is difficult to have a well-paid job even though you have a high education diploma. In reality,there are some successful men who don't have go to college .So you can be one of them,and never give up.