文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;可适当增加复合句和从句的使用;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。
When it comes to the topic of happiness, everyone’s interpretation varies. An inspiring idea goes that, happiness is not the absence of problems, but the ability to deal with them, I cannot agree with it more. There is no denying that we will encounter many problems in our lives, however, that doesn’t mean we are deprived of happiness. Nick Vujicic had set a great example for us. Born a multiple-crippled, he had endured numerous spite and contempt. Yet, he had never been abandoned by his parents or himself, who at last succeeded in his speaking career and hence had inspired many troubled souls. He had also reaped a merry marriage. He encouraged us to stop accounting obstacles as miserable disadvantages, but on the contrary as an opportunity to develop our capacities to solve them. It is the endeavors we devoted to the solution of the problems that add to our happiness. I believe, even if confronted with difficulties, so long as we pluck up courage with optimism, we are bound to pull through and find our way to happiness.