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China is a beautiful country with abundant culture. If my foreign friend pay a visit to China, I will certainly recommend XiAn as my first choice. To begin with, XiAn is a historical city, many destinys take it as their prime city, such as Tang destiny. Therefore, it can make foreigner experience the Chinese culture deeper. Besides, There are also many famous places of interest. Most people come her to witness one of the Eight Wonders in the word, Bingmayong. It shows how strong the Sui destiny used to be. At the same time, Huaqingchi is a palace where Beauty Yang live in her lifetime. You can also see a wonderful performance about her love story with the empire. Moreover, I'm sure that XiAn's local snakes will leave deep impression on the foreigners.Roujiamo for example. In XiAn, we can not only travel throgh the history sea but also have a feast with tongue.
