2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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Nowsdays, Online Shopping becomes more and more popular in the world.Many people choose the Online Shopping instead of shopping in the reality,because the Online Shopping is very convenient and easy.Because of the Online Shopping has many beneficiant,more and more people will choose the Online Shopping . However,Online Shopping has many problem at the same time.For example,people buy clothes online,and the clothes may not very fit.So,in my opinion,we should choose the right attitude to the Online Shopping.On the one hand,we should watch its adventages.On the other hand,we can't ignore its disadventages.