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句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，不过单词拼写做的很好；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。
China is a beautiful country with abundant culture. If my foreign friend pays a visit to China, I will certainly recommend XiAn as my first choice. To begin with, XiAn is a historical city, many dynasties take it as their capital city, such as Tang dynasty. Therefore, it can make foreigner experience Chinese culture deeper. Besides, there are also many famous places of interest. Most people come her to witness one of the Eight Wonders in the word, Bingmayong. It shows how strong the Sui dynasty used to be. At the same time, Huaqingchi is a palace where Beauty Yang lived in her lifetime. You can also see a wonderful performance about her love story with the empire. Moreover, I'm sure that XiAn's local snakes will leave a deep impression on the foreigners.Take Roujiamo for example. In XiAn, we can not only be personally on the history scene but also have a feast with tongue.
