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文中高级词汇使用较少，但单词拼写做的很棒；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；行文稍欠流畅，应适当增加连接词的使用。
China is a beautiful country with abundant culture. If my foreign friend pays a visit to China, I will certainly recommend XiAn as my first choice. To begin with, XiAn is a historical city, many dynasties take it as their capital city, such as Tang dynasty. Therefore, it can make my friend experience Chinese culture deeper. Besides, there are also many famous places of interest. Most people come her to witness one of the Eight Wonders in the word, Terra-Cotta Warriors. It shows how strong the Sui dynasty used to be. At the same time, Huaqing Hot Spring is a palace where Beauty Yang lived in her lifetime. You can also see a wonderful performance about her love story with the empire. Moreover, I'm sure that XiAn's local snakes will leave a deep impression on the foreigners. Take Roujiamo for example. In XiAn, we can not only have a cultural tour but also have a feast with tongue. All in all, I believe my foreign friend will marvel at the landscape and foods in XiAn.
