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2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:38浏览次数:71620
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Suppose a foreign friend of yours is going to visit your hometown,what is the most interestingplace you would like to take him/her to see and why?
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China has a long history,34 cities ,each city all has themselves special feature and flavour.But my most interesting place is the city of NanJing,JiangSu province. Nanjing is a ancient city,has more than 60,000 civilized history.it is also the center of politics,economy and culture of chinese south,and possess enrich culture and monument.Though times rapidly develop nowadays,nanjing still resever many ancient buildings ,such as the Presidential palace,the mausoleum of Dr.Sun Yet-sen,the Yangtze River in Nanjing and so on.These become chinese place of historical interests,and many travlors around the world will visit every year. Besides,there are lots of delicious food in Nanjing's every street and avenue,specially Nanjing confucius temple.You will know what is the chinese food if you come this city.

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