高级词汇需要继续积累,单词拼写不错;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;文章结构严谨,有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分。
As soon as we see or hear something, it's not smart to get a conclusion. As the saying "every coin has two sides" goes like this, we are supposed to have a strict attitude to make a decision. First of all, I would like to share a short but real story for this. It's about an excellent boy. Most of his classmates think he isn't a good student, for he always doesn't attend class. However, he spent so much time studying what he is really interested in and practiced his professional skills. When curtain of school life came down on, he was enrolled by several famous universities which many students dream of. Anyway, we should not only believe what we see or hear and ignore its essence. For us, college students, in the fast-developing century, we should put more attention on the progress of our own quality rather than focus on the appearance.
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