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生词：负担过重overload 压力 pressure 期望 expectations
作者词汇量积累很好，高级词汇积累要重视；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
Dear Dr Helper, I am a Senior 3 student. I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure. Every day I have to stay at school for nine hours to have lessons and spend at least three to four hours doing my homework at home . We teenagers are eager to play and enjoy ourselves,but we hardly have any time to do what we want. Besides ,we even don’t have enough sleep . There seems to be three causes about the overload ;the pressure of examinations ,too much homework and the high expectations from the parents . We are often warned that if we don’t do our best, we won’t have the chance to go to university. I write this letter only to wish that I could have someone to talk to. I am looking forward to your advice. Yours sincerely, Wang Yong
