托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；文章结构不错，使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词；作者高级词汇量积累不足，部分单词有拼写错误。

As we all know that the people who succeed usually have two main merits: a clear aim, a steady attitude toward success. Thus, people puzzled whether the perseverant attitude can make people more powerful. Personally, to this question, my standpoint is positive that I claim the perseverance makes people stronger. Especially, when the great men all over world and the elites around us are taken into consideration. Firstly, in reality, the great people are always stronger than the ordinary. So, why they are stronger, or in other words, what makes them stronger? I believe the answer is a firm heart. Take Edison, a famous scientist of the whole world, the inventor of electric light, as an example. The people all konw the electric pump is discovered by Edison, but the majority of them don't konw Edison experience more than 1,500 failure before succeed. We can't image if Edison gave up the experiment and did't try it again and again, what the world would be. Therefore, a firmly heart can mak us more powerful and lead us to success. Secondly, if you have a pairs of good at discovering eyes, you should know that the people who is more excellent is the ones that persist in doing everything, especially for their interests and dreams. For instance, Lucy, my best friend, we have make firends seven years. We are all young and have an equal ability of study at the beginning. But through a period, She supassed me and became more and more outstanding, then I pay more attention to observe her learning method, and found that she is persistent. Now, I also become a firm people, and acquire some success. My eaperience also tell me that a people can stronger when they possess a firm heart. In conclusion, summarize the two reason that mentioned above, I firm insist my opinion that if you want to become more stronger and successful, and you should never give up.