托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第49篇:坚持不懈是否能让人变得更加强壮

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As we all know that the people who succeed usually have two main merits: a clear aim, a steady attitude toward success. Thus, people puzzled whether the perseverant attitude can make people more powerful. Personally, to this question, my standpoint is positive that I claim the perseverance makes people stronger. Especially, when the great men all over world and the elites around us are taken into consideration. Firstly, in reality, the great people are always stronger than the ordinary. So, why they are stronger, or in other words, what makes them stronger? I believe the answer is a firm heart. Take Edison, a famous scientist of the whole world, the inventor of electric light, as an example. The people all know the electric pump is discovered by Edison, but the majority of them don't know Edison experience more than 1,500 failure before success. We can't image if Edison gave up the experiment and did't try it again and again, what the world would be. Therefore, a firmly heart can mak us more powerful and lead us to success. Secondly, if you have eyes which is good at discovering , you should know that the people who is more excellent is the ones that persist in doing everything, especially for their interests and dreams. For instance, Lucy, my best friend, we have made friends seven years. We are all young and have a common ability of study at the beginning. But through a period, she surpassed me and became more and more outstanding, then I paid more attention to observe her learning method, and found that she is persistent. Now, I also become a firm person, and acquire some success. My experience also told me that a people can stronger when they possess a firm heart. In conclusion, summarize the two reasons that mentioned above, I firm insist that if you want to become more powerful and successful, and you should never give up.