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When you climb the mountain , you should notice : Don’t start fires in the woods in order to protect the trees . Don’ throw rubbish everywhere .When you leave , please take the waste paper and tins with you .Try to leave the countryside clean . Water is very important。 The villagers get their drinking water from the river, so you must keep the river clean。 Protect the plants and animals . Do not kill or hurt any animals , birds or insects . Do not dig up plants or pick flowers . Have a good time .