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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17596
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分74.0分
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如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活,但在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

用户练习作文:

It's well-known that judgments are the most important elements to do anything. And it's alos the key point to make whatever you want to do successfully. Judgements can be generally classified into two parts: serious judgements and snap judgments. It's said that snap jugdmengts can never be trusted. In my point of view, I'm deeply agree with it. Snap jugdments are short of value and unbelievable because a good judgement needs careful thinking, lots of former experiences and repitual experiments. Moreover, one person's power and intelligence is too enough to make a good judgment. Brainstorm and communicating is seriously needed when judgements are made. Different people have different points of views, some of which might be the best one. That's the mental spark. That's why business people will have a meeting ahead to make a new decision. Politians will hold a national conference to make a judgment . It proves that making a judgment needs to take a long time. Snap judgments are unavailable. Although , some people will say snap judgments can also take advantages under some urgency. We are not sure they will be right decisions or the wrong ones. It's not faithful. In conclude, snap judgments can not be trusted and believed.

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