Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.
文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
With the computer-science develops rapidly, our way of communication has changed a lot. In the past, we may walk a long way to see our friends,write a letter to the one we care about. While now, you can hear one's voice through a telephone, chat with your friends and parent by QQ and wechat, use skype to see a friend in the distant. But are the electronic communication really can take the place of face to face communication? I do not think so. Today, many youngster stay in room the whole day, walk out of the room unless their computer crashes. In these way, they reduce their time with family. Some may even text their parents when they are in the same house! Continue doing these, the youngster will become anti-society. Besides, when you are communicating with someone by electronic equippment, you can do many things in the same time which lead to a less focus on the conversation. For all these, although electronic communication is convient, the face-to-face communication is not replaceable.