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采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；可适当增加几条从句。
As we all know, the fifth day of the fifth lunar month is Dragon Boat Festival which is the important traditional festival in China. When the festival coming, people are going to watch the boats game with family although the day is always so hot. In my eyes, the traditional Chinese festival invariably centre on maintaining and improving human relations, certainly the Dragon Boat Festival cannot desperate this theme, which can be union the family and go to outside to relax themselves. For this fast society, it is necessary to brake and with your famiy to hang out. There is a custom with rice dumpings since QuYuan die, when the festival coming, people eat rice dumpings the go to watch the competition of boat. Those boast is very creative, including dragon head, narrow body of boat, which people sit on boat in order. Dragom boat competition is well received in China, which spread a healthy and activity idea. In my opinion, the advantage of the Dragon Boat festival outweigh its disadvantage. We should learn its benefit from all festival and overcome the short of traditional festival.
