2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文中拼写错误较多，平时练习过程中应注意词汇量的积累。

With the development of the technology,computer has become a part of our life.A number of people use it to do everything it can do,such as,surffing in internet,chatting with or other,calling food,and so on.We have to recognize that it makes our life moer and more convinece,but we should reflect our lifestlye has changed.Many people can not deal with the relarity bewteen the people and computer. To begin with,the computer was used by people to save simple thing we can not do .but,nowaday,we use it to do many thing that we also can do it.That is no doubt that we are relying on it very seriously.This phenomenon is sourroud in us. How to solut in it.First,we should take the awarness of the computer that we should use in mise.Second,we should do all we cad do which is benefit to our brain.Finally,although this is a technology age,but we should live in a real world rather in a unexsist ones.