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As we all known ,a great number of students prefer learning foreign language .In the recent year ,many parents ask thier kids to join in the foreign lesson in the holiday ,which some kids also wnat to join in .In the meanwhile ,our mother language-Chinese,which has been ignored ,is becoming the second language in mang people'mind . That is no doubt that we don not want to get the result that our language was not existed .A language respects the country's culture.If its language are not used by its people at all ,it will mean that the country was exsist. As far as I am concerned,Chinese is our mother language ,we should protect it from foreign language.It is necesarry to take high qualify of our language.