题目 Should parents send their kids to art classes?
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Should parents send their kids to art classes?Some preson hold this point that kids shoulds not be sent to art classes.Because kids should live in a nothing with the arrangemeng of their parents,and do all they want to by the reasonable situattion.Giving a childhood that they want. But ,the others agree with this prospective that parents should send their kids to art classes.Sending kids to art classes can not only make them get a new skill,but aslo make their body stronge.That is no doubt that it is a wise selection. For my own prospective,parent should asked them before making selection.If their kids don't want to go there,they shouldn't force their kids.
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