2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵。

If I have chance to take my foreign friend to visit my hometown, I'll take him to visit Shanghai Tower, because this building is the tallest building in my city, and it can be regarded as a landmark building, also inside you can overlooking the beautiful city, especially at night.