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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:诚实

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:25浏览次数:3374
要求:

题目要求:

围绕诚实写一篇小作文。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分58.0分
评语:

文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;作者词汇表达不够多样,要注意单词拼写的检查;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

Honest,this word means a lot to us.As a person,this word is a kind of the virtue.And how do you think of it? From the beginning,i want to say that if you doesn' be honest,then you will lose a lot of thing, your friends,your relatives,your friendships... Secondly,whatever we will be in the future,we should be honest to ourself and the others.in this way,we will not only know ourself better,but also we can communicate with other guys better. Finally,in my opinion,i think honest can also bring us many things.for example,a person who will deal many thing with the honest,maybe it will bring to him a lot of chance.this is a better way to live better. in a world,it is nothing but important for us to be a honest person!

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