2015年高考作文优秀范文：中秋节

作者词汇表达丰富度要继续提升，高级词汇使用过少；文中应增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。

The Mid-Autumn Festival The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends。