托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第19篇:20年后人们是否会有更多的业余时间

作者句法基础不错，可适当增加复杂句的使用；词汇表达不够丰富，要增加高级词汇的使用；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。

Those who think that with the society development people in the future can do more things that they are interested might say people will have more time for leisure activities. However, I disagree with this statement that people don't have more time for leisure activities. There're two major aspects: the work time and what people interest. Firstly, after twenty years, the society become more and more developed. But I think at that time, people who only have one job may don't have enough salary to buy everything that they want. So if they want own what they want, they should spend more time on work not on leisure activities. Moreover, I think people in the future will care more about material universe, so I think people will pay more attention to money not in leisure activities. it is the reason that people don't care about leisure activities. In summary, I disagree with this statement that people spend more time to leisure activities.