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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4565
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分86.0分
评语:

作者能较灵活准确地使用词汇表达,但学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays, almost everyone in the cities has a phone. When one is on a subway, he is looking at his phone. When one is on the bathroom, he is looking at his phone. So everyone in the world is more connected because of their phone or Internet. Via the internet, people can use their cell phone and PC to communicate with some else as soon as they want. But every coin has two sides. Since internet has the capacity of making people communicate with others in front of PC or cell phone, which means that people can translate their words without hanging out or face to face talking, more and more people would rather stay at home than go out to meet some one. As a result, some people gradually lose their normal ability to communicate with others. Moreover, many young students bury themselves on the online games. On the online games, they can do things that they cannot in the real world and meet friends just by typing. They get lost on the internet. Young people who are keen on the virtual games even got mental illnesses in the past few years. In a word, the internet also has a negative effect on mutual connection. From my point of view, the internet is the technical crystallize of human beings. It absolutely decrease the distance between people. And it make communication easier and more casual. So internet is necessary in our life. But we should also take attention on the side of its'negative impact. Taking action to clear the unhealthy parts of the internet is important.

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