托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

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The Rio Olympic Games, recently, is holding, and all of the athletes have a heavy pressure for the hope of nations that they can have a remarkable score to improve the honour of the countries. However,to the sport activities, whether the true meaning is to depend on the result or not. Personally, I claim that the sports are benefit to both of the winners and losers, especially, when the experience and exercise is taken into consideration. Every experience is our life wealthy for we can acquire much knowledge from it. Sports are one of the most popular activities, the majorities have taken part in them.Meanwhile, the sports are not only an activity, but also a compete program.Therefore, the destination of the athletes is various,some of them just want to became the champion, some of the them hope they can find the drawbacks by competing for with other to improve his skills, the others think that the sports can exercise their body and make them more healthy. So much desire is rely on sports, in other ward, through the sports, different people would gain differen achievement. So, the sports is filled with meaning, not just the champion is meaningful and others is meaningless. In conclusion, the view of participating in sports is worthwhile only when you win in something is error. We can see it as a competing activity, also we can think it as a pleasure things, both of them is decide by themselves.