2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(42):和老师建立良好的师生关系

词汇表达较灵活准确，高级词汇使用过少，另外注意文中个别的拼写错误；作者可适当增加词汇的丰富度，部分句子有错误；文章层次不够分明，缺少组织，需注意文章整体的组织结构。

As a middle school student ，it is necessary to build a good relationship with our teachers.Let me tell you how can you do . First of all ,we should care about our teachers .And ,we concentred on learning in the their class .We would better show our best for them .Second ,we should try our best to active in class .Then ,we must join them and learn well .What's more ,the teachers are strit in us some times .But they only want us to make greate progress . However ,we should thanks the teachers and hope them happy every day !