2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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I was born in Jia Xing,Zhejing Province. Jiaxing is famous for South Lake.I would like to take my foreign friend to see South Lake.The peaceful lake likes a beautiful woman.As we all know,the Red Boat was represent the involution of Chinese Communist.The scene is wonderful.Every year,thousands and hundreds visitors come here.