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When it comes to honest ,many people's opinion differ form peason to peason. Nowadays ,there are many people lose their honest,it lead to a bad situation.Some hold that the honest is not essemcial.howere others view that we should keep the honest because it can bring a lot of benefit ,and people work each other need the honest.We can not live happy without living with our friends,and our friends believed the honesty man.If we lose the honest ,it will bring many trouble ,for example,when we get in trouble ,we should somebody lend theri hand to us ,so that we can solve the problem.On the other hand ,w e will make many real friends . All in all, the honest is play an important role in our life.
