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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第34篇:一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么

发布时间:2013-08-14 17:05浏览次数:5599
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作文题目:

In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor?) that a person can have to be successful in life?

Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

一个成功的人最重要的品质是什么?给出原因并举例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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In my opinion,the most important characteristic to be successful is intelligence . I work in a design field, I have 3 reasons support my viewpoint. For our working-class people, grade comes first, success need technology as foundation, for instance,when we negotiate with any other person,we need speech skills learned from school,or strategies summarized from books,especially know-hows on analysis,such as charts,shortcut of calculating, management methods,based on these we can understand the meaning of documents fast and solve problems and troubles encountered,if a man is more intelligent,he can learn more the solve more. Second,intelligence mean can see clearly and hear things. Make a good decision,we need to consider different aspects thoroughly, observe carefully, a man without intelligence obviously can't complete a challenging project well. Third,intelligence makes great grade report,this means it can ensure us graduated with great good certifications, and qualify a better job. Nowadays , job market make a great offer to the people who have good certifications, especially for the top ten universities.

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