托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第4篇:比你年龄大的人的建议是否会比同龄人给你的建议有价值

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Those who think that young people's advice is more useful than old friend's might say young friend has a more cleverer mind. However, I agree with this statement that advice from friends of an older age would be more valuable than from friends your own age. There’re two major aspects: the experience and the way to solve problem. Firstly, the older friend has solve a lot of problem, so they are the expect of solve problem. In a sense, It is true that younger friend has more idea to solve problem. But sometimes, younger people cannot solve problem as comprehensive as older friend. For example, I have a friend, one times i have a contradiction with my another friend. He want to mediate our relationship,so he makes a very immature advice for me. This advise make my friends with me almost break off relations. Finally, my another older friends help me solve the problem. Moreover, the older friend has live a lot of years, so that they have a wealth experience. For example, my friend sam, he is a very old person and he is a manager. As a result of his experience, he always solve problem very quickly. So his boss very like him. In summary, I think older friend’s advice is more serviceable than young friend’s.