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I like his vivid bule eyes For about 120 dollars, visitors to China’s Great Wall can now leave their mark on a fake wall built recently in the name of preventing graffiti (乱画) on the real structure.The management office of the Juyongguan section of the Great Wall in Beijing built the fake wall and will charge 999 yuan for carvings on each brick, daily newspaper The First reported.