作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;从句数量不足。
We have known each other for three months.I like he very much.He has vivid blue eyes and make me infatuate smile face.Maybe this man is my destiny.When I sad,lonely,fear time.Is he,give me courage,powerful,confidence.Thankful god grant this man for me.I will leave you until till the seas dry up and the rocks decay.