作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
We have known each other for three months. I like his more than much. He has vivid blue eyes and makes me infatuate face. Maybe this man is my destiny. When I sad,lonely,fear time.Is he,give me courage,powerful,confidence. Thankful god grant this man for me. I will leave you until till the seas dry up and the rocks decay.