作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
We have known each other for three months. I like his more than much. He has vivid blue eyes and makes me infatuate face. Maybe this man is my destiny. When I 'm sad, lonely, fear time. Is he,give me courage, powerful, confidence. Thankful god grant this man for me. I will leave you until till the seas dry up and the rocks decay.