从句使用不熟练;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
We have known each other for three months. I like his more than much. He has vivid blue eyes and makes me infatuate face. Must be this man is my destiny. When I 'm sad, lonely, fear time. It's he, giving me courage, powerful, confidence. Thankful God grant this man for me. I will leave you until till the seas dry up and the rocks decay.