正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构。
We have known each other for three months. I like his more than much. He has vivid blue eyes and makes me infatuate face. Maybe this man is my destiny. When I 'm sad, lonely, fear time. It's he, giving me courage, powerful, confidence. God grant the man for me. I will leave you until till the seas dry up and the rocks decay.