作者词汇表达不够多样,希望能多使用高级词汇;简单句偏多了;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用。
We have konwn each other for three months.I like he very much.He has vivid blue eyes and make me infatuate smile face.Maybe this man is my destiny.When I sad,lonely,fear time.Is he,give me courage,powerful,confidence.Thankful the Gods grant this man for me.I will leave you until till the seas dry up and the rocks decay.