托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第46篇:是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；用词灵活多样，也能较灵活地使用一些高级词汇；作者句法很棒，合理使用了复杂句。

People have different attitudes to whether further education should be open to everyone ; some people believe that one should be entitled to receive higher education , no matter who they are ,where they are from and what gifts they have . however , the opponents argue that universities should be more meaningful for advanced students . Personally , think that everyone should have right to enter into a university or a college to improve his understanding of knowledge , thus enhancing himself . Admittedly, there are several concerns that opponents have when it comes to to open further education to all .Firstly , subjects learned in advanced educations require students to have a high level of intelligence and abilities ,which is impossible for each to have . when the average students enroll to courses , they may find it difficult to follow up and even lose their confidence . On the other hand , as for the universities and nation , it can be a waste of money and human effort if learners can hardly gain any knowledge from further education . Secondly , further education is different from elementary education because it aims at improving one's gift or triggering one's interest rather than providing elementary knowledge to students . therefore , it should only be available for a small part of people to enjoy ; Though all the reasons may make sense to some extent , still believe that people should gain their opportunities for higher education. People may vary in the term of their gift but never their potentials.Therefore , no matter to what degree of intelligence one is considered , he should still own a chance to enhance himself ,which is the most important meaning of living.Only when he gets advanced education can he have a better understanding of knowledge as well as himself.When thinking of this , no one would deny that receiving a higher education can make a difference to a person. Particularly for the students who come from a disadvantage family , getting a higher education can play a vital role. All the things may change when they are given opportunities to be educated in these universities , better preparing themselves for their future career and eventually improving their lives by finding a decent job . Education seems to be the very way fro them to make a change . Therefore , their opportunities should not be deprived because of shortage of money . To conclude , even though it may be difficult for everyone to enter into the universities , government ,schools and families should all make efforts together to makes it benefit all people .