题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;语句间的衔接成分用的不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富。
With the dramatic development of current society, a worrying issue has sprung up to a great extent that the sense of trust among individuals has faded. For instance, when we clap eyes on a lame tramp on the street begging for money, we will take a skeptical attitude toward his authentic physical condition, and hence few of us will decide to help. The emergence of such phenomenon is due to the prevalence of dishonesty. The public feel exhausted about frauds springing up one after another. And so fearful are they of being caught into fickle traps again. Accordingly, we became excessively cautious with other’s guarantees and ignorant of our fading bond of trust. Yet, trust is an essential of human interactions, which cannot be established in a single day, whether it be with a friend, spouse or business associate. To cultivate and maintain trust, we ought to be honest in the very first beginning. And then, we should confide in others so as to gain faith from the other side.